her skin bleeds red and blood hits the floor she's tired of it she wants no more... she'll bleed out until she's done blood will leave until there's none
laying on the floor with blood all around
every bit of blood she's lost is pooling on the ground
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rihytoric is present, the inspiration is the brain, and the magic come via your pain, good job cuz you used specific words to describe the situation, good job, and well done.thank you for sharing with us your poems.