Wednesday, December 30, 2009

~ Recycling ~ [new Year Bouquet ~ Niv] Comments

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~ RECYCLING ~ [New Year Bouquet ~ niv]

Ms. Nivedita
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Narender Singh Bansal 25 November 2010

old wine in a new bottle, well done modern poetess

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David Beckham 05 August 2010

My mother would always tell me, 'There is nothing new under the sky' If she sees this she would say, 'I told you didn't I? ' well done

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 August 2010

this reminds me of a story about a gold tried in the fire.... like a diamond on a black cloth... anyway, nice write as always

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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 August 2010

Good poetic demonstration of Indian classical philosophy in contemporary times. Hypothetical study of human brain-war between reality and unreal, between light and dark, between death and eternity. Furniture is gorgeously engraved with pearls and diamonds of etheral conceptions, so it will be very ecstatic to use a living furniture which is uplifted mentally from its material root. That is the realized human being who attains such truth by heart. Sometimes supreme uses it and sometimes the ignorant part of supreme (unrealized individual) . Thank you much for offering such beauty. One thing perhaps you have missed to mention......all such poems are the recycled poems of ancestors........ Enjoyed. Regards, 10++++ pranab

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 August 2010

We must be constantly recycling ourselves. Food for thought.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 August 2010

Our body as you say has a recycling mechanism with which it survives life long.

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Lynn Glover 10 June 2010

After reading your poem, I feel as though I can be recycled and probably would turn out better. A very discriptive and interesting approach to several matters. Good Write.

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Braja K Sarkar 28 April 2010

All our recyclings are Recycled obliviousness of Our innate ‘Scendlessness................. Wonderful I This is the pivot point of this poem.Even we do not read the rest of this poem, we have nothing to lose...Thanks Dear Niv

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Bachha Chakravorty 18 April 2010

Wow! What a Caption! ! Now the contents: Every word is with diamond studded meaning still a few to discuss as my understanding in Wisdom and poetic hierarchical order [1] All our recyclings are/Recycled obliviousness of/Our innate ‘Scendlessness’. [2] Our knowledges are/Recycled reflective ‘Wisdom’ [3] Our raptures are/Recycled spark of ‘Bliss’ [4] Our loves are/Recycled ‘Supreme Love’. [5] Our ‘Jiva-Atmans’ are/Recycled minuscule of ‘Param Atman’. Finally it is needless to say all are [in this poem] distilled and concise Vedic sayings… so far I've read Thanks for such a poem of penta [or more] spectrum poem 10++++

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Unique Umbrellaisation…and canvas is Vast and... Glossary is very much helpful for getting acquainted with Vedic wisdom… Finish is highest Vedantic wisdom Non-Dualism ‘Scendlessness’ …I’m Thou … or I’m That [in uppercase] All our recycling are/Recycled obliviousness of/Our innate ‘Scendlessness’. The Name of the poem bears a new dimension… Thanks Ma’am for such a great poem… 10+++

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Brilliant write. Shown deep thoughts and philosophy.. I am enlighten when I read it. Well done Enjoyed 10+

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2010

Your title is brilliant, as is the theme (recycling) of the piece. I find the whole poem a tab laborious though - a bit like a too long shopping list. There are nonetheless, quite a few jewels dazzling between the lines. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 January 2010

The Title of Poem is Unique…and the Theme too Superb… Magnificent conception and full of Wisdom [Vedic]…finally the added Glossary made it readers friendly … 10 Dr. V.

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 January 2010

The Title of Poem is Unique…and the Theme too Superb… Magnificent conception and full of Wisdom [Vedic]…finally the added Glossary made it readers friendly … 10 Dr. V.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 January 2010

Hi Niv, I enjoyed reading this poem...even if I had to read it a second time. I'm enlighten when I read your work. Its amazing the power religion/ beliefs can have on a society-'psychsomatic' explains it well. a 10++++++

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Prashant Shaurya 07 January 2010

an enlightening poem with a brilliant and interesting pattern.. you seem to be very religious madam and the poem shows it all.. and you have a lot of knowledge about spirituality too.. keep brightening us as always.. warm regards prashant shaurya

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John Knight 02 January 2010

Hi NIV - As usual excellent poem in structure and content - this one is very philosphical and really makes us all think in circles. I score it a TEN. When God made the Planet Earth to enable it to continue to support life - in all its forms including THE HUMAN RACE - he provided a series of cycles to support everything for perpetuity and to ensure we never run short of essentilas. Sceince has discovered CYCLES for Water - Oxygen - Nitrogen - Carbon and all the other elements essential for life.. These cycles are powered by the Sun another of God's great provsions. Becasue we are part of the Biosphere and rely on God's Cycles we ourselves become an integral part of God's Cyclic Systems as you so aptly describe in your elegant poem. It is obvious that the elements in or bodies return to the ground and become part of the next generation - in that sense we are all being reincarnated. Our emotions are also part of a great global emotional cycle - we can chose which part of the emotional spectrum we wish to choose - love or hate - joy or sorrow - greed or generosity - just as we choose colours for or gament from God's rainbow of VIBGYOR - so all aspects of our lives are recycled on God's Wonderful Roundabout. This should make us all love oneanother better and because we are all one global Family eliminate Wars and Poverty and Disease - and let us Recycle Love - joy - peace - gentleness - kindness - goodness - faithfulness - humility and self control - the Fruits of God's Holy Spirit. Thanks again NIV for such a lovely mindbending poem. Love you in poetry JOHN XXX

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Chitra - 01 January 2010

a meta-psychological poem, taking us beyond the cycle-recycle of the mortal frame into the realms of the Higher Essence! ! well done Ma'am! !

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Amitabha Bagchi 01 January 2010

Indeed a novel style of poem [and noble] …full of perfusion in imagination…and made readers’ friendly by added glossary….thanks… Ten++ AB London

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 01 January 2010

Deep thoughts and philosophy. It deserves to be read several times. Thanks for sharing.

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