Recovery Comments

past are like shadows of our life bcoz light flows over it. a beautiful ink searching to flow in your thoughts.

A really nice write!

you have pulled a beautiful poem from your magic box. we all recover from the first poem my do we ever. But there is many more to come in the future. keep writing you are very talented. (and I love your name)

Times ahead have to make the amends and certainly there is a recovery awaiting.. An engrossing poem of the kind, dear Aswath.

Loved the image of blue spark.A note of optimism!

My dear Honorable Poet Magic Box seems to me that you have worked a miracle (no magic) with this brilliantly written poem of optimism. This has really light up my life and makes me want to just keeping on making giant steps. You have written a very encouraging poem (smile) on Recovery. It can be painful but well worth the effort in the end. Inspiring and very well crafted.

I loved reading this poem with amazing lines written with deep emotions about past times! Brilliant write!

I am burning it now, Let it light my thoughts Your thoughts now as bright as needed. You delivered a good poem. Thank you.

The idea is original, and the way you express you new days and dream also very nice one...we shall dance for new awakening..recovery! _Soul

Life moves on with optimistic thoughts but we still remember our olden days....superb poem with a message.

beautiful..! ! so touched and inspiring it should be life, there is always a time for recovery great thought and very good written

The emotion well presented. I love this poem.

oh so finally the past is buried for good looking for a brigher present and future, , , , a gud write aswath

Yes life has to move forward. A great message in this poem and i really liked the optimistic approach! ! ! :)))

Yet a blue spark came from it, And I heard a small cry! After all, It was alive! Once! loved it. please read some of mine. :)

Aha! great notes of optimism and winged expectations from a poet given to pessimistic over tunes otherwise. Aswath, let this recovery be final and I hope another spell of dejection will not afflict you very soon. Poetry becomes a great device for reading human thoughts when you can use it in different ways and your ability to do so is a fine trait of your integrity and originality, Aswath..

A beautiful and well written piece - love the analogy. Very clever.

Keep writing poems, life never stands still! ! ! rgds! ! !

In the flame of passion burn your mistakes if any, and start anew! It sure is going to be a new dawn full of promises! A great write Aswath! !

Recovery...a perfect title for perfect poem... a great one bhayya