Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Reconciliation Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's not you alone,
its me, too,
we both have been lost,
in a desert of time,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 01 October 2015

This poem I highly applaud for the lofty message it carries! Rewind, replay and reconcile! Great! A10

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Sanjukta Nag 30 September 2015

I am still vulnerable, Rewind, replay, and reconcile. ........ what an expression! speechless!

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Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

**~I am an advocate for second chances. Few tho they are, if one gets an opportunity, it must be given full heart

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Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

I am an advocate for second chances. Few tho they are, if one gets an opportunity, it must be given full heart

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Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

I am an advocate for second chances. Few tho they are. But if one comes along it must be given full heart

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

Awesome poetic work, everybody wish a second chance to rectify, reconcile and correct the past. Very well said Bhaijaan..... We are punished in a land of ego, can't we become the return convicts? I am still vulnerable, Rewind, replay, and reconcile.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2015

Not you alone both of we have lost. But we can regain it soon. Reconciliation matters a lot for union memory. Wise sharing and thoughtful poem....10

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