Saturday, December 2, 2017

Recognizing Me Comments

Rating: 4.4

Down on this earth
I'm a but a ghost,
A ghost of my former self
A ghost of my inner being
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Monalisa Jena
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

I don't know What am I? and who am I? a ghost of the past? ? ? this birth is unique and very important and God-given gift...... you proceed from God and go into God after death..... your identity is in God..... than k you for this poem which made me think...... tony

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 December 2017

A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

In such a short time Every one around me- think that I'm sad My friends don't know how to handle me. Your inner conditions so well explained. 10

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Like a ghost of my past little do I know how to return to the person That I used to be. Lovely poem shared.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10+++

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 04 December 2017

Recognition happens from outer and outer beings. Deep inside you are free and you need to admit it. Good one

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Monalisa Jena 07 December 2017

Thank you respected sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

Nor do Irecognize the new me at all, It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++

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Monalisa Jena 07 December 2017

Thank you my dear and respected sir for your warm remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2017

Returning to the previous state is difficult but not impossible A beautiful poem

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Monalisa Jena 07 December 2017

Thank you my respected sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

An insightful introspection well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Monalisa.

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Monalisa Jena 07 December 2017

Thank you sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged.

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