Down on this earth
I'm a but a ghost,
A ghost of my former self
A ghost of my inner being
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A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++
In such a short time Every one around me- think that I'm sad My friends don't know how to handle me. Your inner conditions so well explained. 10
Like a ghost of my past little do I know how to return to the person That I used to be. Lovely poem shared.
It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10+++
Recognition happens from outer and outer beings. Deep inside you are free and you need to admit it. Good one
Thank you respected sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa
Nor do Irecognize the new me at all, It's scary frightful for me to change so much. A debut yet powerul poem, so introspecting, so revealing. Thanks Monalisa for the lovely sharing. 10++++++
Thank you my dear and respected sir for your warm remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa
Returning to the previous state is difficult but not impossible A beautiful poem
Thank you my respected sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged. Monalisa
An insightful introspection well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Monalisa.
Thank you sir for your great remark on my small poem.It's my pleasure, I feel obliged.
I don't know What am I? and who am I? a ghost of the past? ? ? this birth is unique and very important and God-given gift...... you proceed from God and go into God after death..... your identity is in God..... than k you for this poem which made me think...... tony