Tuesday, December 3, 2019

Recognitions Comments

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I feel confused
for my future
because I have
conflicting desires
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Laura arwen
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C F 03 December 2019

You have written about a life that is so bleak quite effectively …. hoping you can overcome the need for isolation and find comfort in spite of disorder and the crowd. Some of your stanzas are quite deep: better to have an imaginary friend for my loneliness … In the coldness nothing hurts

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