Sunday, September 16, 2018

Reclining Buddhas Comments

Rating: 3.5

Recline with me on a sea of green.
Mirror my curved lines with your slender limbs.
Rest your head on your right hand as I my left.
Look into my eyes and return my smile.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 16 September 2018

nice, suzanne. funny the things that come to mind—sea of green immediately made me think of the beatles' yellow submarine. and the floating suggests to me images from marc chagall, a favorite artist of mine. this poem has such a pleasant and dreamy quality. did you want to keep it buddha rather than buddhas? -glen

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Suzanne Hayasaki 16 September 2018

Suggestion taken. Thanks!

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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