Recklessness Comments

It's good :) hey, there is no use of commenting on your own poems to thank people. You can message them because they wont be able to see it. Of course you should write more. You have a great talent don't let it go to waste. I'm jealous of your skills D:

Rated 10 no way! thank you for your comment I wrote this poem a few months ago, but no one commented now I finally have a comment I'm thinking to write more poems now. Your feedback is very helpful and much appreciated =)

A story full of metaphors and colors of pain and loyalty to the on who u love is changed into a beautiful pic., , Although it seems sad and painful but it talking about the loyalty which we've missed it nowadays, , great work, , keep on writing poems like this we're waiting :) , , rated 10

This my first time writing a poem, so people tell me what you think?