She was tangled in her lover’s words
He always seemed to leave
more questions than answers
In her mind
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Hmmm...this one has potential. As a mentor of mine always says, cut, cut, and trim.
'there still remained beneath the pain of rejection the deep, slow ache of want and longing and the sweet aftertaste of his voice. It was all over her head' - the poem ends so beautifully!