~ Recipe Of My First Kiss ~ Comments

Another great poem, Niv! ! -RQ-

What a great write, its fun and light and so true. I really like the way you took you poem and wrote outside of the box. Loved it 10+++

dear Ms.niv lovely poem i loved it very much :)

You clearly have NOT skimped your research N. ah ah. Your vocabulary is impressive, very. High marks fr originality again. P.

Wow, your way of writing surprises me every time, you are a great poet. Very intelligent as well, you could probably describe anything in the world! Thank you so much for sharing! .... Marina...

I would never have thought that a poem about a kiss could be written in this way! What a masterpiece, unique, unusual yet capturing read. You are an inspired poetess, so well done; D

This poem is a lot different from the others that you have written. There is great precision for every word in the poem has significance. It is important in describing romance without betraying its excitement.10/10

Well i dont know how to comment this one. It was just fun......... N i'm lol.................

Now then Niv... You had me laughing with this great ditty! How to make the perfect kiss, almost like a scientist with a mathematical equation to come up with the best kiss ever! This is very imaginative concept with some genuine feel good moments mixed with the a great light-heartedness, I think you are very generous of spirit and love to share the feeling and bliss of such things like loving kisses shared by two impassioned souls. Superbly described and formatted in a way to think that Delia Smith herself had prepared, cooked, chilled and garnished this kiss like a true masterchef! Very very good indeed! Dale :)

A most unusual subject for a thesis but nevertheless a really enightening one! 10.

niv you have a unique style-but you do manage to put across your point with unmatched eloquence and fever.pls send page no of yr ebook

A unique expression of the first kiss! It's marvelous, unmatched on PH, you are a godess poetess. I loved your poem 10++++. Read mine '.I've Fallen in Love. '.Thanks

Happened like must Juxtaposition of Four lips in trust. Wildly fascinating fiesta but occasional lucidity are banned perhaps when the word 'trust' have been declared all of its end. Echoing again 'I have a promise to keep'. So hard such writing only a poet can feel its craft, we the reader are commonly not very literate to penetrate the feelings the poet tries to communicate, so misunderstood. Any way, feel good, go the next........... Regards 10+++ Apoet

well written very lovely poem liked it 10+++

With due apology to the learned member, I do not find the expression in this poem 'vulgar'. Yes, they are bordering some crude facts but can the realities of life be really separated from art? At the same time, it is a fact that there are many other poems of Niv which fascinate us more than this.

Unioned lapping Solace gulping. deep poem on first kiss.....you just glorified the term and the memories and explained why is the first so important! 10++

I'm sure all readers have experienced the his kiss and want to thank you for taking us all down memory lane with this great poem. Lynn

This is the path, in fact. Lucky ones are chosen for that kiss. Inventive and very different.10

That poem is very good.

Trying to follow the recipe of [my] first kiss make dame hiss in fear having to prepare, mix, and finally digest [to absorb mentally and physically] such a delicious rich kiss.This is a recipe to pass along to my children LOL...delighhtful images and pleasing metaphors, NIv.a 10+++