The flood of recession
has shaken the foundation
of house of hope,
built on land of optimism
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A wonderful piece of art showing present social state.
‘Pink slip Is deep dip In depression Hybrids frustration! ’ Great humanist write. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please visit my page WHY HACK MY SHE [Listed In Top 500] Or other poems. niv
Nice theme..... Alas! what sin did these beautiful colours commit? For every negative facet of the world a splendid colour has to bear guilt! We have a BLUE, A RED and now PINK!
I wish I could agree with you, but then economics has a way of impacting everything, even life and love...
Its a wonderful poem.congrats! ! ! ! to be selected in top 500 poems
some realistic approach...the adverse effects of recession...on pink...really amazing.. optimism life zeal still left.. superb.. 10 from me..
Like Thomas Hardy, here you express of something of very pessimistic. But in the last stanza, you express your hope of waning love. I dedicate this two lines: In darkness, you find nothing, In the morning, the new sun give you everything.
Your poem as shaken the foundations of poetry--just super+++++10 Love glues us all together we will rise keep giving us this STUFF.I shudder to think of 1926 thanks for the way you write regards x
You have shown the human race a ray of light, in times of hopelessness! No wonder it has made it's way to the top 500.
Do we dare to take the chance opening our lives again to romance Our passion burns like a summer heat a love that's strong beautiful and sweet?
a beautiful true words..enjoyed this piece...as love care and warmth the base of any peace...10++++
No one shall slip or sleep, gud write with deep sense of love... Keep it up... Read PROMISE in my poems.
Anju, your poem is similar to that of Victorian novelist Thomas Hardy.You are really genius.Your optimistic message gives us a new sunny morning- a morning full of new light-a light of hope-a hope for universal happiness-a happinss for all-all rank of people-people of the world-the world in unity-unity in diversity-a diversity in colour but an equal demand-a demand for love.
Very visual and flowing words, very refreshing, yet it has great depth too..beautfully expressed..thanks Anjali 10++ with love shan_
A novel thought, beautifuly expressed, may love ever bloom in the hearts of our human race!
if your neighbour loses his love, it is recession and if you lose, it is depression!
The hope is swept away in torrential flood of depression Recession be it the cessation of love REcession be it the senescence of love Recession cannot be its haute couture carnival Love is not parochial, nor even like those crotons or crosseau transitional Love is all recession-proof and ever flowing A dancing wound echoing through a bludgeoning mouth....... Superb write Anjali...........+++++++++++++++++10
It's a poem reverberating with the reality. I gave 10. Congrats!