Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, July 19, 2012

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I am prepared to receive punishment
With whatever you plan for resentment
I shall mind none and instead go for it
As it is the only means open for me to feel fit
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Re: Receive punishment (Score: 1) by Zbird on Thursday, July 19,2012 (09: 25: 39) so sad and melancholy and full of despair and hopelessness. well written and expressed.

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Ramesh Rai 19 July 2012

Certainly your confession is nice through this poem. I like it.

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Rajendran Muthiah 19 July 2012

You have regretted for your action of saying 'bye' to her. To regret is divine nature. Well Done.

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I am prepared to receive punishment With whatever you plan for resentment I shall mind none and instead go for it As it is the only means open for me to feel fit

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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