Saturday, January 28, 2017

Receding Wave Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wave recedes into the sea,
along with love that used to be.
The sun recedes behind the cloud,
and life recedes beneath the shroud.
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 30 January 2017

A great write on love and loss. All your poems on these topics are superb. Very heart-touching indeed. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 30 January 2017

Thanks Nosheen. I guess that topic is what I know best and feel most.

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Dimitrios Galanis 28 January 2017

That's a true elegy like those first written by greek poets since the 6th c. b.d.

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Barry Middleton 28 January 2017

Thanks Dimitrios. That is very high praise.

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