Monday, May 16, 2016

Rebuild Comments

Rating: 4.5

It's too cold to tell the truth to you
cause I'm aching at the sky's deep blue
but darling, there's not much left to do
but build this house back up.
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Maya Hanson
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Anil Kumar Panda 16 May 2016

You breathe made-up words into my pen- it's too close to starting over, then soon bare trees will bloom again and complete, we will begin with spring... is really a very beautiful stanza and touching. Loved the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 May 2016

pure beautiful tools, good one..

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