When you kissed me, you kissed my soul
When you'd say you loved me I felt the pull
The want for existence, the need to feel whole
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Your poem 'Reborn From Ashes' is quite appealing, inasmuch as it is written from the spurt of feelings in the lonely hours of the early morning. I enjoyed reading it. The title is apt, the text has a universal appeal. We all make mistakes. Our mistakes tell upon our lives and we are remorseful when we understand that. Over all, a nice poem, well written.
Great poem. Sometimes I wake up at 3: 00 with a poem in my head and have to get up and write it down! Well written.
'written on your phone at 3 a.m.' (from your note): you mean you didn't modify it later? if so, it is a great example of creative impetus, a high quality burst of mental energy.. Good
Wow! What an amazing job you did! We all make mistakes throughout our lives that we regret later on. I hope you two reconnect some day. If not, keep using your talent as a writer! You're fabulous!