Saturday, January 3, 2015

Reborn From Ashes Comments

Rating: 4.8

When you kissed me, you kissed my soul
When you'd say you loved me I felt the pull
The want for existence, the need to feel whole
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Bernard Snyder 14 July 2015

Wow! What an amazing job you did! We all make mistakes throughout our lives that we regret later on. I hope you two reconnect some day. If not, keep using your talent as a writer! You're fabulous!

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Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2015

Your poem 'Reborn From Ashes' is quite appealing, inasmuch as it is written from the spurt of feelings in the lonely hours of the early morning. I enjoyed reading it. The title is apt, the text has a universal appeal. We all make mistakes. Our mistakes tell upon our lives and we are remorseful when we understand that. Over all, a nice poem, well written.

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Kim Barney 12 January 2015

Great poem. Sometimes I wake up at 3: 00 with a poem in my head and have to get up and write it down! Well written.

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 January 2015

'written on your phone at 3 a.m.' (from your note): you mean you didn't modify it later? if so, it is a great example of creative impetus, a high quality burst of mental energy.. Good

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