Reborn Comments

Small Poem Packs the Punch...Reborn to Prevail Justice. I liked it. Such is the beauty of poem, where small poems have profound meaning. Nice Keep Writing

Thank you. Your poem really goes to heart. Never stop writing you are brilliant.

Your words have inspired me to write: Phoenix.....based on Reborn by Dave Walker The Phoenix has risen as my soul was born into this world. I see the souls of others as I see the universe whorl, I can look into your heart, and feel your inner child. The Phoenix has risen, he is never to be defiled. We each have had a Phoenix rise into the sky. We traverse the universe as our souls learn to fly.

Profound write, like it!

again and again, we choose to return... love this one a lot!

Truly one of my favourites, I reread this one a couple of times. Amazing depth, and an interesting look into 'rebirth, ' beautiful work, you never disappoint me.

Each rebirth bringing with it a renewed zest, vigor to fight back the wrong....poet not hoping but assured of his victory each time. Do or die kind of spirit. Deep hidden meaning!

Excelllent poem, , a lot of things are in this poems to remember, , it'll bring us a new life when we rise from an ash... Well written!

Rising out of the ashes...exactly like a phoenix..but i still question if justice ever really existed....sad but true. Great poetry..short but meaningful.

Magic. Like a phoenix? I also believe in justice, though I like to call it karma.

Simply beautiful, so much has been said with few words, truly amazing.

Rise after the ashes, any souls will under the fire again with spirit to fly to conquer world under the spell of new life...Invades your skin, and sharper senses...fly and fly till we broken and fall into the ashes again and reborn once again...the lost will fade in fire and the winner will keep survive..Nice poem you have written here, could be fit well in my mind...Raise, burn and fly your life Dave.._ Unwritten Soul