A dumb girl who hates
Only herself never
The ones that deserve it
She stabs at the love
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Before I can decipher What has occurred She is finished, tired Leaning back into herself Central idea of rebirth.enjoyed the flow of words here.
I could connect with the 'energy'. The punchlines kept coming. The changing nature of the scenes and the swift flow of words, brings the whole piece together quite majestically. I love the concluding line, 'she is more...' tfs 10/10