Saturday, March 1, 2008

Rebirth Me Comments

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I can’t take these feelings anymore inside
So much I want to say yet I have to hide
Seems the ones I love have an answer to hate
And deny any chance for me to congregate
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Ben Gieske 31 March 2008

Very well said. You echo the thoughts and experiences of many I am sure. At least I can identify with a lot of what you say. Can there be true love without pain? Can we truly grow as individuals without suffering? Lately, as I read about many poets and others who have made known their experiences, I am amazed at how many have suffered more than I have in their early and later lives. Perhaps, the best solution is to write. As some other poets have claimed: Salvation comes through writing. So keep writing.

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Coach Roth 01 March 2008

Love the title...the poem is at times very powerful...Bhuddists monks chant 'I choose to rejoice in the sorrowfulness of life.' Embrace the pain, end the confusion, keep searching, and definitely keep writing...thanks...Coach

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