Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Rebirth Comments

Rating: 3.0

Within our dark and secret sea
Soundlessly we grow
In our suspended state
With the sure flow
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Tom Billsborough
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Anil Kumar Panda 16 April 2016

But if the heart sings well, Some notes may form a pure tune To bring us back to peace and harmony... is beautiful. Sometimes the mystery of our appearance in this planet gives so many reasons all returning to the same points where they have started. Very nice.

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Tom Billsborough 16 April 2016

Yes, Anil. Perhaps when we write we are seeking that way back. I would always believe writing brings us closer to understanding, even if it can be frustrating at times. Tom Billsborough

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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2016

I take multiple times during the day to go into to deep thought, purging myself of negative and seeking answers; if only my own. A 10

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Tom Billsborough 16 April 2016

So I've noticed in your very deep and reflective poems, Kelly

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Norah Tunney 13 April 2016

I appreciate this poem it's a hard thing to express meditation I have meditated since my teens.its lovely when the mind is quiet but its also fine when it's busy and doing its thing I feel the stillness through your words I like the lines we set sail to mediate and find the still calm within our being It feels like even the one who is meditating falls away. What a journey and what an adventure it all is.thank you Tom

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