As is wont with all beings,
I foresee
a dark cloud descend on me,
to free this soul
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Though this poem is a great write but i somehow felt your gloom about life in this....i may be too young to say such heavy words but i strongly feel that THE BEST WAY to lead a HAPPY LIFE s: ' FORGET those who HURT you yesterday, but DON't FORGET those who LOVE YOU EVERYDAY....
Did you know that only those people dies who do not want to learn anymore. If there are more lessons for you in this life you cannot leave yet. I am over 78, but I am like a child, every second brings me a new and newer study. I believe in the reincarnation story, but not on another planet. We are locked in here and more for you: What you see in others it is in you. It is up to how you handle this. In this case you represent for me the gloom about life, but I do my best to cheer you up, because I found true health, happiness and good living here and now. What is out there, I ignore and I know someday my world is changing for my outlook. We cannot control others, we can only control ourselves, to ignore and never to dictate. If you read more of my ideas, you might get a different glimp then you have now. Wishing you Gods best teachings, that you could find peace and contentment in happiness.
Release from the rounds of reincarnation with the wish to find eternal rest - great write.
Very nicely envisioned. Excellent speculation and collocation. Thanks for sharing.....10
Thanks for appreciation, Kumarmani.