Rebirth Comments

'Vacant eyes portray an empty soul, Bleakness of my reality claims each breath, Silent rivers of tears burst forth in floods, There must be an ending to this numbness, Virgin flesh meets razor's edge' Immaculate lines, beautiful writing! Truly brilliant.

'My inner demon, my darker half, Taunting me with my own emotions, ' Amazing! - You captured such a strong emotion and portrayed it so well... -Truly a fabulous write!

Fighting the demons can be hard, the feeling of beating the demons is amazing. A really good poem.

Wait...suddenly the voice from 'Quality Control' detecting something....this one need to re do Rebirth again..till all hurts healed like baby skin again :) Hahahaha....hahahahahaha Rebirth is not a rebirth if everything is the same...we born as innocent and pure, if you got rebirth must repeat all the same beginning again...maybe in just few shape :) the shape of spirit and soul healer! ! ! _Unwritten Soul