Monday, June 15, 2009

Rebirth Comments

Rating: 3.2

Out I came, walking towards the deck,
getting close to the empty terrace,
just too close, not to think, Oh! No! I slipped,
I am hitting the bottom,
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Vijay Sai R
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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Good Poem. I do get Dreams like writing exams unable to proceed with single line, but suddenly wake up and find that I got my Engineering Degree several decades back. Definitely your rebirth is rebirth only.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2010

A nice piece of work. Keep it up. Thank you. E.K.L.

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warner treuter 20 November 2009

Flying dreams are the best, they're fun. As to falling and hitting the ground, it's said that if you ever hit the ground you really die. I wondered about that and so one night I dreamt I actually hit the ground - then I dreamt i hit the ground in a couple more dreams. Lo, I'm still here - I think. So much for these sayings said by people who don't really know but like to say they know because people seldom hit the ground in their dreams and so don't know - and yes, a thump can sometimes actually be dreamfelt. Same thing with feeling the cold steel of a knife entering you. Never having bem stabbed i wondered if the knife really felt cold. And so - it did, in a dream one night.

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Munia Khan 05 October 2009

Your heart beating like a lady bug....? ? ? ? Yes, may your dream come true. Nice poem.10

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it was rather a nightmare! ! ! I hate too these hallucinations! ! ! sometimes I have my heart in my mouth... a good description! ! !

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Sayz LFlynn 27 June 2009

I hate those falling dreams! gets me everytime! 10!

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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