Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Rebirth Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sky luminous with stars
The trees dancing
The breeze
Cooled by the lake
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Great Poem. Well written!

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Cherry Zhai 14 October 2008

Life is very beautiful under your pen, so is in your heart.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 October 2008

a very good interpretation........I liked it.

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 09 October 2008

An exquisite poem! Very thought provoking with truth in the message.-Cathy

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M M 08 October 2008

A lovely poem, through which whispers the wind of changes, consciousness, which gives the readers a wise message. Rebirth is possible...

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Rani Turton 08 October 2008

This is truly lovely! Thanks!

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 08 October 2008

feels warm...to rebirth...

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Sandi Alford 08 October 2008

Each line of your pen is a 'rebirth' in itself. Great job here :) Let the ink flow! Blessings, Sandi

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

'In every moment of life In each space of time The warmth The light Inside Me Rebirth Again' 10 for this excellent poem. Love it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

oh lovely! ! new taste! .........10++

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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2008

Simple, but effective. Lovely poem. Kind regards, Sandra

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Jessica Munez 08 October 2008

while i was reading it i felt like i was there

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C T Heart 08 October 2008

awesome piece...a 10 for you as always.

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Evaughn Gray 07 October 2008

this was a really nice poem.. very inviting, sweet, light, lovely, it was honest.. ~Hazel G.E

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Allan Macli Borges 07 October 2008

beautiful wrinting, well placed words... one more 10...

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Anjali Sinha 07 October 2008

amir theres so much warmth in your poem --i like this 'The warmth The light Inside Me Rebirth Again' ++10 regards anjali

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Seema Chowdhury 07 October 2008

the scent of your presence........... excellent composition. i hope everyone will have some one special who can give us the courage to survive in life.

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Ershad Mazumder 07 October 2008

Super excellant. This is the poem I always look for. Keep on writinf dear PN

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Thad Wilk 07 October 2008

A splendid write Shiraz! She brings a rebirth to you And makes your whole world - seem new! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

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Lovely poem.I envy you as I wish I'd written this one.very nice images and I gave you a ten.

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