Rebirth Comments

michael i read it three or four times, there is a message in there of a man who loses control of his emotions, while protecting his property which i can relate to, you could rework it the material for a poem is here and you would have the ability to rework it material is so importent for a poem Warm regards allan

a dog or a hound of a poem, is it a poem AJS

I really enjoyed this too..will have to read it again though, to get the full effect...well done

Wow! I really like this one...and especially the 'coffee ground bitter scowl.' New poets should study the way you have described a crazy old (?) man who frighten children and then freak out. This is understated and says A LOT. Good work1 Raynette