Thursday, August 21, 2008

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Pitch-black night skies
Illuminate against naked street lamps
Stars attempt shooting
Off they go one after another
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francesca zumbo
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Emily Oldham 17 September 2008

I like the last line, but didn't you mention a canvas in one of your other poems? we all do it- but it's a habit we need to break, using the same imagery in different poems! Great though fran (or is it frankie?) . Athena xx

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