Rebirth Comments

Come to me, we'll merge in one! In mind the vision as The One; I will receive the life profoundly, For half-dead I am...still standing......so touching and profound. A beautiful poem on life and love nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

'Left out without the pain, Numbness in my heart regained; Lifeless is the breath I take, Unnecessary life I make.' life and time weave such feelings into our lives but 'Come to me, we'll merge in one! ' In mind the vision as The One; 'I will receive the life profoundly, For half-dead I am...still standing.' with these ardent words reading like Shakespeare, sometimes the pain ferments a depth of sound seasoned in beautiful penetrating insights

To fly my soul away! ! Nice piece of work.