Monday, November 16, 2020

Rebels Refrain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't just get on the train
I wanna find out its true destination
How long it will stop at the station
The weather whether it will rain
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Varsha M 16 November 2020

I don't just get on the train I wanna find out its true destination How long it will stop at the station The weather whether it will rain The speed it will travel All these questions i unravel And i maintain A rebels refrain......and I feel this is good attitude. To be prepared for what you are toiling makes the goal more easy and simple. Even I like these organized looks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 November 2020

Excellent rhymes as usual, dear Poet! 5 Stars Full Vote. I have enjoyed a very lot. Thank you for sharing. Added with God's Blessings

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People people 16 November 2020

People will kill you like a dog...stop barking

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Poem Hunter 16 November 2020

You are a banduke... rickshaw puller...hhh

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Your mom''s husband 16 November 2020

U rascal. What do you write? Don't play your dirty game...GgDash

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