Thursday, September 6, 2012

Rebellious Sentiments Comments

Rating: 4.5

dont reason me out of my feelings
what I feel for you
is past sense
is past logic
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 30 September 2012

Your voice and ideas escalate magnificently in this piece. A crescendo of feelings so easy to relate to. I like the feverish energy that is conveyed- gives the idea of a mad scientist, or one crazed with affection, lol. Thanks for sharing.

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Alexis ... 06 September 2012

Wow very good! It started off powerfully and ended even more so with the last line. Very good!

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