Our shoulders are drooping
They are heavily laden
With numerous harsh laws
The rulers had imposed.
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The pains we feel inside......brilliant. Thank u. anjandev roy.
A great poetic write, I can feel your anger and rage. More poetry like these from your pen, please!
They put us under the silkiness Of their palms Yet, their fingers Act like giant claws That strangle And get our nods of agreement On the laws they love to implement.......so impressive. Beautiful poem.
Rebellion is the soul of progress. It's the duty of every human soul to smash harsh laws, and dethrone oppressive rulers. This is a poem of revolutionary spirit. Such poems are oxygen to positive social change. Sadly, poets nowadays are becoming increasingly personal and are rarely concerned about society. I greatly appreciate your poem.
Behind the mutinies there is injustice, physical and mental tortures. A great poem.
This poem expresses when enough is enough.well penned.++10
Our shoulders are drooping They are heavily laden With numerous harsh laws The rulers had imposed. That's the condition of all the underdeveloped countries, a touching poem.
We are treated with iron fists/Reduced to mere machines/The rulers forgot/That we have hearts....It's a pragmatic write quite insightful Rose! Thanks for sharing...10
A good insight, Dr. Dillip. Thank you for your time and visit.
Toils of suffering! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks, Edward for your comment and visit. They will always be treasured.
Nods of agreement obeys love. Beauty of life is accepted through love and not by anger. This is a very thought provoking poem. We all need peace and care...10
Thank you for the insight. I do agree, we all need peace. Your visit is highly appreciated.
Yikes! I wonder if you are writing about Pilipino or American politicians, OR those of all countries. I don't need you to tell me. And i wonder if you are a rebel at heart, ready to hit and roll. bri :)