Rebecca Comments
You spent your first few months, in the royal county of Meath,
A landscape so bountiful, of green pastures, majestic castles and leafy trees,
Born beautiful with deep brown eyes, like creamy milk chocolate spun so fine,
You glow like a moonlit night, with stars shining so bright,
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Life has not been all kind to you, But you have mastered the fight for survival, You have stood tall, when mere mortals would fall, Determined, with amazing zest for life, a better fulfilled nest, An amazing picture of a mother's all that she has in her hearts for a lovely daughter............10
this poem is full of hopes, dreams and a deep love for your daughter. well done
What a beautiful and transparent recollection Madam Hazel! The odds of the life might have struck Rebecca down. But she will live ever in the minds.
Rebecca sounds beautiful and as she is a lucky charm not worth letting go. I know you don't know me but, I fell in love with you and Rebecca in this poem. I wish I had a bond with my mother that close=, (
The edited form of your poem is better now. I should tell you a simple, beautiful, natural poet. Your poem has touched my heart.
Your best yet Hazel. Memorable lines that could only be born out of love. They touch the soul and kiss the heart. love it.
Pure motherly love out-poured for beautiful and amazingly lovely daughter.
Above all love supercede everything..the words re captivating, rhyme is perfect; good work! thumbs up! !
A reservoir of powerful, beautiful and touching words along with a rich imagery! Your great love and touching feelings as mother are admirable my dear! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!
Wao! Your maternal love is great, your poem is great too.
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8/7/2025 6:08:19 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly penned with conviction. Lovely words of encouragement to a resourceful young lady. Thanks for sharing Hazel. Always remain blessed.