Monday, February 5, 2018

Reason Trialed Comments

Rating: 5.0

My reason was tried by my rage.
I devoured ice on dancing flames.
I landed safe on brittle quakes.
I blessed their soul when they thrashed my fame.
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Henry Tong
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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

a good decision comes from findings reason By now my reason had outwon my brawl and resigned to suppression that befell. nice 10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 08 April 2018

Beautiful thoughts penned in a beautiful manner.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2018

It's a beautiful piece of poetry! My favorite lines: Those knights had knelt down by their arms/whose spirits colluded with their charms...Thanks for sharing....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 February 2018

I devoured ice on dancing flame, spirits colludind with charms... very fine poetic expressions dear poet. tony

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Henry 05 February 2018

Thx Tony for the comment! I would be more than happy to introduce my other poems, and i also look forward to reading yours!

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