Tuesday, July 17, 2007

Reaping The Rewards Comments

Rating: 4.8

Carried so gently in the house
Careful each step
Walk softly like a mouse
My heart giving one big leap
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Patricia Gale
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Raymond Wright 13 August 2007

Suddenly I am craving watermelon! You got me again! xoxo ~Ray

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Ashley S 17 July 2007

Lovely poem! Your description of the watermelon made my mouth actually water! ! LOL It's almost like seeing a child grow up and go away to college, gardening is. Much nurturing involved. Enjoyed it and you deserve a brag :) Take care! Ashley xo

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David Taylor 17 July 2007

At least it didn't get away...like my fish the other day.... Very nice and homely Patricia.

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OOOH I'm proud of you! I think this is lovely P. Well-written of course but also so sort of... homely and telling. Enjoy! t xxx

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