Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Realms Of Another Spirituality Comments

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Palm trees gathered together in clusters, holding tightly
to the fruit of their essence, coconuts growing up high,
just below their branches, forming circular sights to us
below.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 May 2016

May I take liberty of reproducing a stanza from my poem about the wonderful qualities of coconut here under: - Solace could be found from sip through straw When ambrosia from raw coconut you draw, That can make you in scorching summer calm Standing beneath meager shadow of a palm. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 May 2016

Nature through it's wonderful and amazing manifestations along with their unique intricacies presents a number of spiritual conceptions with elaboration. Thanks for sharing this beautifully crafted meaningful and thought provoking poem.10 points.

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