Realm Of Wishes Comments

This narrative is an acid trip with anime surrealism, the theme seems to be never trust your surroundings for every eden is an oasis of future despair. Your central character seems to be transported between two worlds but ultimately solidifies into one world where the character is faced with the same dilemma that he immediately began. Thus the scars he bears are a making of his own creation and wishing proves to have tragedy for what occurs. A great narrative, if you work at this over and over again you could make this into an epic

The phase- Be carful for what you wish for... you just might get it... Comes to mind. Excellent Write Tiffany... I am convinced now, after reading your requested words... that you are a very gifted, talented young writer! My three words of Advice for your writing future.... Nevr Stop Writing! ! ! Outstanding Ink! ! ! Such a pleasure! ! ! ; -) Kelly.

Another good poem. The meaning to it and the imagery was excellent.

this is awesome.... it's not all what it seems to be.... thanks for telling us that... :)

a reminder that the grass is not always greener. Well done Tiffany

interesting surrealistic story poem -thank you for sharing

i don't know but i somehow got reminded of after apple picking by robert frost.. you have created a beautiful and meaningful story here, you played with words and created a great piece..kudos! ! !