Friday, May 11, 2012

Realm Of The Dream Comments

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Dust billows aimlessly on a rolling breeze,
Carrying a scent of aridity,
Smothering the frail shoots of life that never cease,
To contend with Nature obliviously.
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Rajendran Muthiah 12 May 2012

Most of the lines are beautiful pithy sayings. (The souls of...reality, Nature yawns...... defiance) . The title itself sounds pleasing with 'm'-liquid sound. Beautiful poem

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