Friday, May 6, 2016

Realm Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

As i look at the sun rising in the sky,
i feel like a newborn,
i feel like failure is a lie.
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shrutika kahale
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Kelly Kurt 12 May 2016

The wonder and appreciation of nature is poetically written here with love and eloquence.

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Shrutika Kahale 22 May 2016

thank you so much for going through my poem and placing your comment. thanks a loy nks

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Tom Billsborough 06 May 2016

You commented on my i am here poem. I wasn't sure whether I'd read any of yours. Actually I've read three and been very impressed by your faultless sense of rhythm. But there is much more to you than just rhythm. I am sure this is the best poem I've read today. It is very inspiring and beautifully composed. It's a certain 10. Tom Billsborough

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Shrutika Kahale 07 May 2016

thankyou so much for you kind appreciaton, n rating my work as 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

I feel like a new born! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

my pleasure edward. thankyou

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Halin Roche 06 May 2016

beautiful poem shrutika.... ;)

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

thankyou so much ransom

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