As i look at the sun rising in the sky,
i feel like a newborn,
i feel like failure is a lie.
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You commented on my i am here poem. I wasn't sure whether I'd read any of yours. Actually I've read three and been very impressed by your faultless sense of rhythm. But there is much more to you than just rhythm. I am sure this is the best poem I've read today. It is very inspiring and beautifully composed. It's a certain 10. Tom Billsborough
The wonder and appreciation of nature is poetically written here with love and eloquence.
thank you so much for going through my poem and placing your comment. thanks a loy nks