Friday, October 20, 2006

Realm Of An Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I pause at daybreak
And utter prayers with sparrows,
I know there will later be
Encounters that require
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ernestine Northover 20 October 2006

Oh, that's so sad Uriah, I feel like giving you one big hug to make up for all your sadness. A lovely write, so poignant and melancholy. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Linda Ori 20 October 2006

Sounds like you've given up the fight. That's OK - when you hit the bottom of the barrell, that's when destiny smiles on you. Take heart - love will come again........at least that's what they say (whoever THEY are) ! Sad, but poweerful write. Linda

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Sandra Fowler 20 October 2006

Much creative power expended in the making of this poem. Excellent work.Uriah. Kind regards, Sandra

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Declan McHenry 20 October 2006

Uriah, some great emotive work as always. Grand.

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