Saturday, January 17, 2009

Really Miss You Comments

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When I was away
I always missed you
and on my way
I thought about nothing but you
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Mustafa Khairallah
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Jose Murguia 18 January 2009

beatiful poem a really well written piece of art!

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Aiswarya. T.anish 18 January 2009

nice write...Keep writing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 January 2009

Missing someone is really a great feeling of love. Nice piece of write.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 January 2009

Treasure your love when you got one.Missing a loved ones is like a disease.Nice piece Mus.

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liked how you used the subject in the peice to rhyme throughout.. nice

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 January 2009

your heartprint, thanks for sharing

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Mustafa Khairallah

Mustafa Khairallah

Alexandria Egypt
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