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The last four lines aptly brings home the message. Well done

Repenting and realising is to 'happily pick an unfinished one.'....well penned10

A creative piece making effective use of the similie....thought provoking too...good write

nicely done...I loved it it resonated my spirit. Leaving you with that 'aha' moment at the end...10+.

Sort of like a cold bucket of ice water, to make one think.

VERY DIFFERENT PIECE...FLOWS ALONG VERY NATURALLY

cool poem! ! :) i like it! ! ! ! ! !

thoughtful piece, well done, thanks for shaing

Each line well thought through and stating it's own point. A sensitive poem full of good imagery. - - - warm regards - - from Fay

I like the way the poem starts with 'The eyes that spoke one day are silent now, ' I pray that your journey is unfettered, without any confinement...

Hey, my friend! ! This is brilliant work! Each line can stand on its own or flow together as one. Beautifully written and expressed with great passion.

Creative use of simile. A fine, expressive piece. 10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

this is a nice work..similar to quotations...every statement has a deep meaning..nicely penned..