Friday, September 4, 2020

Realization - Lost Love Comments

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The arms of slumber took me to the darkness
where silence dwells, in peace and serenity,
It lets me speak to and inquire about the love
Before I could ask, it left, leaving behind a trail.
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 07 September 2020

Too late to realise. Repentance is the only way to rectify.

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 September 2020

Before it is too late let us safe guard our love.

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Gordon Walter 06 September 2020

What a wonderful poem.... We only realise after losing it.10+ he only hope to revive everything Rests with the LOVE We disregarded when it was with us Now we realise what we have lost.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 September 2020

State of Confusion! ! ! ! Lost love! Broken heart. Sadness! ! Able to gather up the pieces. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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The only hope to revive everything Rests with the LOVE We disregarded when it was with us Now we realise what we have lost. The value of anything precious is realised only when it is lost for ever, especially love..10

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 September 2020

We tend to realize when things and love goes out of hand. We stop nurturing and take love for granted. Very well expressed poem of lost love.10++ for realisation. 🙂

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Rohit P J 04 September 2020

Wonderful poem Restlessness and the state of confusion Is ubiquitously on earth The peace is sadly corned The calmness has gone to take a dip in the sea

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2020

Restlessness and state of confusion sometimes give puzzle in mind but realization of love which is revived it gives us beauty and motivation. You have brilliantly presented your thought of perception on love and lost love topic....10

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Kostas Lagos 04 September 2020

Excellent poem sir! E-x-c-e-l-l-e-n-t

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