Monday, July 23, 2007

****** Realization (A Story) Comments

Rating: 4.5

A dying bird
Once confided in me.
She bemoaned her terrible fate
And told me how it came to be.
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asma bahrainwala
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Sherry Arzish 30 November 2007

you are amazing asma i also loved thepoem and that hindi couplet too.luvlots shiralley

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Melvina Germain 26 July 2007

Although this ended on a sad note, the journey was beautiful in the beginning, but we much be careful what we do. A wonderful story Asma--Melvina--

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Risha : Ahmed 23 July 2007

Asma, This is one beautiful story poem. Touched my heart.

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