You don't realize that it's happened
until it's all said and done
You say it's just a joke
Your just having some harmless fun
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You were right, I did like it. Very strong message, and what I like best, it rhymes and flows and has a nice beat. It can be hard to find the right words when trying to rhyme AND stick to a beat. I know, all my poems (I have more than are on here) rhyme and have a beat, and it can be tough. Good job.
I likes alot : D a good strong message keep up the good work