Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Reality Knocks Comments

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Reality hits
like a sledgehammer of hate
right between the eyes
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Dave Alan Walker
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Kanav Justa 31 December 2013

sometimes reality hits just below your belt, , nice write, , , loved reading it

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Nurain Ali-balogun 18 September 2012

short but weighty, when we drift too far from reality, we tend to find it hard to return to it, so we should always be 'on our guard'...hope for the best but expect the worst. Brilliant poem Dave.

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Philo Yan 11 September 2012

You have hit the nail on the head with this poem about reality. Hard or soft knocks, we have to learn to take it and it forms our experience. Hopefully when we know what we don't know, will be one more step towards gaining wisdom. Thanks for sharing!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 September 2012

This is it's work, but we don't open it sometimes. nice one.

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Eric Cockrell 09 September 2012

be as real as reality!

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Heather Wilson 06 September 2012

Reality knocks quite often here, and each time it seems to knock harder, The truth must be better than lies, but sometimes hard to take, great poem Dave,

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