Reality Is Such Brutality Comments

deep and passionate. top to bottom a great piece of writing. ''reality is something that we try to face, even on an army base'' those lines pull you in from the start. great work

In the reality that is such brutality for you THERE IS A GIFT! I pray you discover it and be surprised and amazed.

Therapy perhaps, but keep in mind that nobody promised you a rose garden without thorns and pain! Your reference to reality as something we face even(?) on an Army base is a bit off the mark, don't you think? That's where reality is up close and personal!

The writing of poetry. my friend, is a therapeutic endeavor! Thanks for sharing.