Friday, July 15, 2011

Reality Check Comments

Rating: 5.0

Reality check
My heart feels as though it is being pulled from left to right
I know the expectations drawn out for me
I know I must flee far from Satan grasp
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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