Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Reality And Boundaries Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why to pursue the dreams
Which don't belong to me
Why to chase dreams
Which are no longer mine
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 February 2022

A very nice poem! Extremely well penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2017

Dreams of life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 03 September 2017

Thanks Edward for your comments.. Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Creation of boundaries on reality in a dream is much interesting. Fantastic metaphorical base... let it be quoted your two lines in this regard... Better to collect pure pearls and pebbles From the deepest ocean of my dreams.

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

I am glad Kumar you reviewed this poem

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 August 2017

a bird in hand is worth two in the bush.......may be the moral of your nice poem..

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

A perfect moral.. Thanks Kishore

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Bharati Nayak 22 August 2017

Is it Diamond or just glitter? Sometimes the truth may hurt And my heart may bleed Better to collect pure pearls and pebbles From the deepest ocean of my dreams. - - - - - - - Yes, it is better to collect pure pearls and pebbles which are present in the ocean of your dreams than chasing dreams which are no longer yours.A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 22 August 2017

Thank you so much for the comments. I am glad that you visited my poem.

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Lamar Cole 22 August 2017

Very deep and introspective poem. This is great poetry writing.

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Rini Shibu 22 August 2017

Thanks for your compliment lam

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Marvelous. Writing Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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