Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moving sleep,
Silent scream.
Peace my child,
Only a dream.
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Amanda Miller
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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Hi Amanda, Very strong piece....fast flowing emotion gives this fine poem more impact.. great stuff...........keep them coming 10 best wishes Jon.

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p.a. noushad 28 June 2008

reality of earthly life, we have to face, we cannot run away, I love this poem.

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Amanda Miller

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