A three year old
Scents his dad's deed well
When the little boy cries aloud
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Who's the earth? ' Mom said'whoever cries louder' Boy asks 'Who cries longer is what? ' Mom says 'mom' 'cause Earth is our mother.......I found these lines are much impressive having outstanding conceptualization. What a great poem! 10
I see a philosophical undertone in your poem which deals with two situations comparing them eloquently and wisely. Superb poem......