Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dying embers, glow fading fast,
Love once vibrant, not destined to last,
Tattered gown, ripped well worn,
Shattered heart, broken and torn.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2022

Sad love.... sorrowful ending. Liked this beautiful imaginative composition. Top score.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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