Monday, April 13, 2009

Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the crowd she passed me by;
Through a land I’d never been,
Might she be a mother, a housewife?
Perhaps some beauty queen.
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Alf Hutchison
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ya dreams are real reflections of the mind... i wrote ' all dreams not come true.... beautiful write. oi appriiciate.

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Mandy Hutchison 20 April 2009

So true, what does a simple gesture of kindness cost any of us!

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Christine Kerr 19 April 2009

That little gesture can mean so much in making somebody's day just a little brighter. You covered the inner thoughts nicely. Excellent write 10++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 15 April 2009

Never a truer word spoken...how nice if we would smile a hello as we race by in our oh, so busy lives.....I am even to afraid to smile as people think you want something or worse....sad world

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Dee Redwood 14 April 2009

Thanks for enjoying my poem, Old Man. I have only read one of your's Reality and had to comment. There is nothing much to smile about in this world today. Now I must read your other poems, keep writing. I have written hundreds of poems but only put a few on the web. Regards Dee

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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

Alf, you are right we should smile more often. My father taught me to greet everybody with a smile of friendship and respect. However dream endings can be somewhat disappointing sometimes. Enjoyable read. Bob

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Alf Hutchison

Alf Hutchison

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